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并附赠一种新型写法简方法。
在阅卷过程中,阅卷老师一般先根据作文结构给出基本分,然后根据用词和句式方面的好坏进行加减分。星火英语原创写作简方法——「三维构建写作法」,参照阅卷老师思路从用词、句式、结构三个维度来构建和修改作文。
三维构建写作法
本期主要讲写作中的「结构」,星火君有10种方法告诉你高分作文首段、中间段以及末端应该怎么写!
本期谈方法(1)和方法(2)。
首段
好的开头是高分作文必不可少的要素,是吸引阅卷老师注意的关键。通过分析近十年的四六级高分作文,我们归纳出了四六级作文首段常用的写作方法。具体如下:
▌现象阐释法
现象阐释法指的是直接就题目进行简单描述,给出自己的理解。这是现象解释型和问题解决型作文最常用的一种方法。
现象阐释法的结构素材主要分为两种:
描述现象/图片1. Recently, the rise in the problem of ______ has aroused public/wide concern.
近来,______问题的增加已经引起了公众/广泛的关注。
2. Recently, the issue of______ has been brought into focus/brought to public attention. 近来,______问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。
3. The problem of______ has caused wide concern over recent years.
近年来,______问题已经引起了广泛的关注。
4. With the rapid growth of______ ,______ have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
随着______的快速增长,______在我们的日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
5. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to______ .
如今,人们越来越意识到______的必要性。
6. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/be aware that______. 如今,越来越多的人开始意识到______。
7. After a good many years of enthusiasm for______ , people begin to______ .
热衷于______多年之后,人们开始______。
8. One of the burning/pressing questions/problems facing/confronting our nation/society today is______ . 我们的国家/社会今天面临的紧迫问题之一是______。
9. With______ playing an increasingly important role in______ , more and more______ . 随着在______中的作用日益重要,越来越多的______。
10. Whenever you see/find______ , you can't help being shocked/surprised at______ . 每当看到/发现______的时候,你会不禁为______感到震惊/惊讶。
11. As the bar chart shows, the number of______ has dramatically increased/decreased during the______ years from______to ______. 如柱状图所示,______的数量从______年到______年______年之间急剧增加/减少。
12. From the graph, we know the statistics of______ and______ . It can be seen easily that ______.
从图表中我们可知______和______的数据。我们可以很容易地看出______。
13. From the bar chart, it is clear that between ______and______ the amount of ranged from ______to______ . 从柱状图中可以清楚地看到,从______到______,______的数量在______到______之间变化。
14. As the bar chart shows, great changes concerning______ took place between______ and______ .
柱状图表明,从______到______,______发生了很大的变化。
15. As can be seen in the graph,______ saw great changes in______between______ and______ .
从图表可知,在______到______之间,______发生了巨大变化。
16. The cartoon vividly depicts ______. 这幅漫画生动地描述了______。
17. As is described in the picture,______ . 如图中所描述的,______。
18. As is vividly indicated in the above drawing/picture,______ .
如上图生动地描述的那样,______。
19. The drawing, thought-provoking as it is, does mirror a social phenomenon that______ . 这幅发人深省的图画的确反映了这样一个社会现象:______。
20. In the cartoon presented to us,______. Obviously, what the cartoon illustrates/reveals is______ .
在展现给我们的图片中,______。显然,该图片说明/揭示的是______。
21. As is symbolically depicted in the drawing above, ______. Although the drawing is designed simply, it does reveal that______ .
正如上图象征性地描绘的一样,______。虽然该图很简单,它确实反映了______。
22. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon,______ . The central point of this cartoon is that______. 正如漫画中生动展示的,______。该漫画的主旨是______。
引出观点
1. This picture demonstrates one of the basic theories of philosophy:______ .
这幅图片展现了哲学的一个基本理论:______。
2. Such a picture draws attention to the fact that______ .
这样一种画面吸引我们注意到这样的现实:______。
3. The purpose of the drawing is to show us that ______.
这幅画是为了向我们展示______。
4. The painter reminds us of a common social phenomenon: ______.画的作者提醒了我们一个普遍的社会现象:______。
▌观点引入法
引入法是观点论证型作文常用的一种方法。该方法开门见山地提出主题,并逐渐引出个人观点。观点引入法常用素材有:
引出观点1. “______” is a proverb full of logic, which has been generally accepted.
“______”是一个非常有道理的谚语,被人们普遍接受。
2. As the old saying goes, “______.” It tells us that ______.
古语道:“______。”该谚语告诉我们______。
3. When it comes to______ , some think/hold/believe that______. Others argue that the opposite is true. 当提及______时,有人认为______。其他人则认为事实恰好相反。
4. There is a public/general debate/discussion today/nowadays on/over/as to the problem/issue of ______. 如今,有一场关于______问题公开的/普遍的争论/讨论。
5. When asked whether it is advisable to ______, different people have different things to say. 关于______是否明智这个问题,不同的人有不同的看法。
6. People's opinions about______ vary from person to person.
关于______,人们的观点因人而异。
7. Some people propose such a question:______ . 许多人提出这样一个问题:______。
8. Different people hold different views about______ .
对于______,不同的人有不同的看法。